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Why Christopher Nolan needs to calm down There's nothing thrilling about over-complicated plots — they create confusion, not tension

Tenet: high concept; utterly baffling


September 4, 2020   5 mins

As a crime writer, I’m supposed to be able to follow thriller plots. (I’ve even presumed to teach plotting on creative writing courses.) But I often can’t. That doesn’t stop me from trying, though. During lockdown, since the cinema was closed, I acquired Amazon Prime and Netflix accounts and watched a succession of thrillers with my wife. And as the credits rolled, the same scenario would play out.

Me: “You enjoy that?”
Wife: “Yes.”
Pause.
Me: “But did you understand it?”
Wife: “Of course I did. Didn’t you?”

I’m a bit tired, frankly, of watching thrillers with my wife. She’s too complacent about plotting. “Oh, who cares how he found out where the villain lives?” she’ll say. “The fact is, he did find out.”

So this week I made —alone — my first visit to a cinema since March. I went to see Tenet, the action-packed blockbuster kickstarting filmgoing after lockdown. That said, I was one of about four people watching it in a huge auditorium. We’d all been reminded to wear face masks “except when eating and drinking”, so I bought a big bag of jelly babies.

Given my particular neurosis, it was asking for trouble to see the particular film. The director, Christopher Nolan, favours complicated high-concept plots. His Inception (2010) is about dreams; Memento (2000) plays about with chronology. I followed shreds of the plot in each case — enough to enjoy the spectacle, because Nolan’s films always look great.

Tenet concerns time travel, and my incomprehension was total, in part because whenever someone appeared to be explaining what was going on, I couldn’t hear them. The main explainer was Kenneth Branagh as the villain who is somehow in touch with the future. He delivers a long, possibly crucial, speech in a blustery wind on a racing catamaran — all the time without really opening his mouth. Explication is further inhibited by the fact that the characters — like the audience — often wear face masks, because when you go backwards in time, there’s no oxygen. (The effect is depressing: it’s as if the actors on screen don’t want to catch Covid from the audience.)

Time travel stories are usually fraught, especially if the author attempts to explain how it’s done; and what happens if you kill your own grandfather back in time? This (‘the Grandfather paradox’) is mumbled about in Tenet. In the film, time travels both forwards and backwards. Approaching the climax, an army officer gives a briefing to two SWAT teams he’s going to be leading in “a pincer movement — not in space, but in time”. The briefing concluded, he asks whether any of the men have questions; none do. I had about a hundred and fifty.

There have been many complaints about the sound mixing of Tenet, and most reviewers have admitted to at least partial bafflement when it comes to the plot. The Telegraph’s line, “Don’t try to understand it — just rewind and enjoy the ride” is common, as though incomprehensibility were some small endearing eccentricity. Or it might be that Nolan is getting credit for creating this smokescreen, as if it proves his brilliance. Apparently, he spent ten years deliberating over the plotline. I don’t know how long he spent on the dialogue, but at one point somebody says, “There’s a new cold war — ice cold.”

Tenet is a thriller, and thrillers are supposed to create tension. If the audience doesn’t know what’s happening — if, for example, they can’t tell who’s chasing who in a backwards car chase — there’s no tension, only confusion.

Of course, there’s room for some confusion in a thriller. It’s like the magician’s fast distraction patter, from which a surprise might spring — and surprises can help build tension. But what’s even better is the opposite of surprise: anticipation. This can arise from a particular situation — for instance Alfred Hitchcock’s famous example of a bomb under a table. The characters don’t know it’s there: will it go off? Or it might come from the audience’s knowledge of a fatal flaw in a character’s makeup. In this way, tension and characterisation are intertwined.

The plot of Roman Polanski’s film, Chinatown, is intricate, but the complications hinge on the peculiar and poignant situation of the Faye Dunaway character. I know dozens of people who’ve seen it — none of them say it was too complicated. The same is true of Robert Altman’s film of Raymond Chandler’s novel, The Long Goodbye, in which the characters are given better motivations than in the original novel. (We’ll be coming back to Chandler). Of more recent films, I’d cite Knives Out, a whodunit of last year, as a film with well-managed complications.

Knives Out pays homage to ‘Golden Age’ of British ‘whodunit’ crime writing, of which the main exponents were Agatha Christie and Dorothy L. Sayers. Their books are also called ‘cosies’ because the settings are opulent and the detectives are God-like — and the more complications the detective can surmount, the more God-like they are.

The cosiness was appreciated by readers seeking relief from the social tensions of inter-war Britain, but there are often too many twists. In The Five Red Herrings by Sayers, it takes Lord Peter Wimsey about 30 pages to explain whodunit. A Christie novel to avoid is Murder on the Links, where there’s much hasty shuffling of suspects towards the end, as though she realised, in a panic, that each successive one was too obvious.

The Golden Age books usually have too many suspects, and the existence of the character finally revealed as the culprit might have entirely slipped your mind. In his essay, The Simple Art of Murder, Raymond Chandler wrote that, when reading the Golden Agers, he found himself having to “go back to page 47 to refresh my memory about exactly what time the second gardener potted the prize-winning tea rose begonia”.

But if Chandler’s stories were more realistic than those of Christie and Sayers, his plotting could be just as problematic. Farewell My Lovely begins with Chandler’s detective, Marlowe, observing a murder committed by an overwrought man looking for an ex-girlfriend. Marlowe is then immediately involved in another murder of a more rational type, relating to a jewel theft. The two murders eventually serve the overall plot, but the juxtaposition jars. They don’t seem to belong in the same book, and they once did belong to separate short stories of Chandler’s, which he cannibalised for the novel — a common habit of his. Chandler is a superb writer of atmosphere and dialogue, but his novels create in me anxiety rather than tension. I’m always waiting for another ragged and disorientating jump cut.

It’s perhaps more tempting to over-plot now than ever — to come up with something for the Tweeters and bloggers to chew on. But I like that strain of genre writers with a casual approach to plot. Elmore Leonard, I think, more or less made up his plots as he went along, influenced by the developing vagaries of his very three-dimensional characters. And I approve of Lee Child’s laidback approach to the Jack Reacher novels: “Ask or imply a question at the beginning of the story, then delay the answer.”

I admire the spare plots of Georges Simenon’s stories featuring the laconic detective Maigret, in which the culprit might be someone Maigret — and the reader — vaguely thought it was all along, and this person is finally triggered into an admission by an apposite remark of the detective’s.

Christopher Nolan should read some Maigrets. He might then make a film where people yawn, watch the rain fall, savour a last Calvados while the barman puts the chairs on the table. And he would do it so beautifully.

 

Andrew Martin’s latest novel is The Winker (Corsair)


Andrew Martin is a journalist and novelist. His latest book is Yorkshire: There and Back.


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Alex Mitchell
Alex Mitchell
4 years ago

Mumbling actors is a pet peeve of mine. It might be more realistic than stage-play style oratory of decades ago, but at least then you knew what the hell was going on. Nothing worse than repeated rewinds to make out a garbled statement.

mrgrahammarklee
mrgrahammarklee
4 years ago

Dreadful film. Cliched characters and dialogue and a preposterous plot which made no sense whatsoever.

Like the reviewer I couldn’t make out what the actors were saying half the time but it was all so daft I didn’t care one way or another.

Fraser Bailey
Fraser Bailey
4 years ago

You could say the same of more or less anything that comes out of Hollywood.

cromreturns
cromreturns
4 years ago

You should not be going to theatres. Shame on you.

David Yeetmore
David Yeetmore
4 years ago

Cliched characters and dialogue, sure. But just because you couldn’t make sense of the movie, doesn’t mean the plot made no sense.

Christopher Chantrill
Christopher Chantrill
4 years ago

It’s a question innit. All these mysteries and thrillers have way over-complicated plots yet we still go to see them.

I watched Nolan’s Inception and wondered how it could be such a hit when the plot was so complicated that I just gave up on it.

More research is needed.

Michael Cleghorn
Michael Cleghorn
4 years ago

I loved inception. It is my favourite movie. Not for everyone though.

robert scheetz
robert scheetz
4 years ago

Mystification itself has mass market appeal. Most consumers of spectacle aren’t in the market for truth, goodness, beauty, but sensation, thrills, and escape.

Tamara Perez
Tamara Perez
4 years ago

Even with subtitles I wouldn’t have understood it. I had to read the Wikipedia plot summary afterwards and I still didn’t understand it. Tedious battle scene at the end where I didn’t know who was who and cared less. There’s a big deal with the red tag on the rucksack which, it seems, was important in the opera business at the beginning which felt as though it had happened aeons before,

Laughed out at your description of Branagh on the catamaran. Enjoyed being physically in the cinema, so there was that.

cromreturns
cromreturns
4 years ago
Reply to  Tamara Perez

Stay out of the theatre. Think of others than yourself.

Eugene Norman
Eugene Norman
4 years ago

I have Subtitles on all the time on Netflix. I have no hearing issues according to any tests but can’t hear all the mumbling. And Nolan in particular mixes the music too high and the vocal too low.

A Spetzari
A Spetzari
4 years ago

Interesting article thanks.

I guess this is partly a result of more developed plots and characters having been pushed into series (or seasons), leaving cinema the place for more grand, sweeping dramatic visuals with less depth.

I really liked Memento and his Batman films (Batmen?), as well as The Prestige. But didn’t really get all the fuss about Inception. Much like you describe Tenet, it was all beautiful and epic, but with not that much sense in the dialogue or plot. Maybe I’m too thick, but just didn’t really get what I was supposed to “get” and why that made it so clever as everyone said.

Ok so a dream within a dream…and….?

Sandy Markwick
Sandy Markwick
4 years ago

Totally agree. I feel the same about Charlie Kaufman. The high concepts of eg Synedoche are fun to play with but IMO would benefit from being distilled down into a simpler and more comprehensible story.

nick harman
nick harman
4 years ago

I wonder sometimes if the inaudible dialogue of modern films is down to the director simply being lazy about microphones. Doesn’t want them on the actors, doesn;t want booms in shot. So just carries on with a basic setup

Olaf Felts
Olaf Felts
4 years ago
Reply to  nick harman

Inaudible dialogue – very perplexing given digital media is supposed to be superior to the olde analogue – so it’s a very pertinent question as to why this is often such a problem with modern films.

Ray Warren
Ray Warren
4 years ago

Took my mind off Covid for a couple of hours and gave us something else to talk about. It wasn’t a great film but good to get back to cinema. The cinema experience is better than staying home.

cromreturns
cromreturns
4 years ago
Reply to  Ray Warren

Stay home and stop spreading COVID. Think of others.

Susan Mills
Susan Mills
4 years ago
Reply to  cromreturns

to tra tra – we get it. thanks, now please leave us alone. paranoia is best enjoyed in privacy.

Roland Ayers
Roland Ayers
4 years ago

I like slow-moving films with barely any action or plot. And no soundtrack. Favourite director – Michael Haneke, favourite film – Treeless Mountain (director So Yong Kim) If you want an antidote to over-complicated action films, if you want to be profoundly moved by the resilience of children in the face the cruelty of a grown-up world – watch it.

Peter Whitehead
Peter Whitehead
4 years ago

I watched it yesterday and didn’t understand any of it especially, as other commentators say, dialogue is inaudible. Why do they think dialogue needs loud music/noises to underscore it?!
I frequently looked at my watch to see when it might end …..please make it stop!
I vaguely understood Inception!

Dan Poynton
Dan Poynton
4 years ago

A man after my own heart. I thought I was the only one who never got it with movie plots, and I’m always surrounded by people like your wife. Apart from being delightfully written, this article has given me great spiritual relief.

medwayview
medwayview
4 years ago

Christopher Nolan is on record, multiple times, saying that he deliberately makes his dialogue hard to hear. Something to do with making us “lean in” and really work at the task of being an audience. The same could be said of his “plots” which are better described as puzzles.

Still, there’s no denying his box-office success, so he clearly has legions of fans. I like to picture them as the sort of people who can’t wait to tell you they belong to MENSA. The bore you move away from at the bar.

cromreturns
cromreturns
4 years ago

Very irresponsible of you to go to a theatre. Shame on you.

Geoff Cox
Geoff Cox
4 years ago
Reply to  cromreturns

Tra Tra – when do you think it will be safe to go back to the theatre?

Charles Rense
Charles Rense
4 years ago

His films are puzzleboxes that I have enjoyed for over twenty years. I don’t expect to understand them in an efficient single viewing, I expect to watch them multiple times to get them. Thats part of the appeal for me.

David Yeetmore
David Yeetmore
4 years ago

If you find it too difficult to understand complex plots, or you are too lazy to, why do you go to see a Nolan movie about time travel? Almost everyone I know that saw this movie understood it and found it amazing. It seems people like you should just stick to more simple movies…

Bob Bobson
Bob Bobson
4 years ago

I admit the dialogue is hard to hear. However, I have to take exception to the criticism of the plot for one reason – Nolan likes to put the viewer in the same situation as the protagonist (best example, Memento). What better way to do this with a time travel film about going backwards and forwards over the same timeline, than to make a film that must be seen twice! I have only seen it once so far, but I am already planning my second viewing to watch certain scenes armed with prior knowledge. Is it not obvious that this is what Nolan intended?